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Good draft. Can you choose 1 font for you, 1 font for the 11, and one font for God in your writing? It would help separate the voices -- if they can be separated that easily. I had some trouble with the gaps. Too much fell through them. It felt like you were shielding yourself from something.
If I'm getting one of the messages correctly: Do not leave Aaron. Do not go back to Charlie. Stability is more important than destiny. Allow stability or you'll be torn apart.
Tell me what you think about this. When you write try to follow more of your own story. For example, when did your mom call you a psychotic narcissist? Be fearless in facing the facts of your past. The miller's daughter outsmarted Rumpelstiltskin by ignoring him. Focus on yourself, not the 11. They'll try to scare the shit out of you, but if you persevere they'll compromise themselves. In the end Rumpelstiltskin confessed his name. I suspect the 11 will do the same. This is part of our prophetic heritage that's missing in The Bible.
When times get tough, remember this: I am always here for you, and will always love you. Laura feels the same.
love,
your editor,
nick
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Hi, I just wanna comment about Nick's comments, thank God you have an editor. Because you do need one, the different fonts are a good idea too. Interesting, I obviously have a lot of catching up to do - I haven't found anything about me yet - but I only have so much time for reading.
ReplyDeleteAnd amen, forget about Charlie, you're running away again so snap out of it. Distracting yourself with false drama. And don't make Aaron feel like he's 2nd best. You're with him now and I know it's hard sometimes to process past relationships and it hasn't been that long ago. You learned a lot from Charlie but that phase is over now. BUT BE NICE TO AARON!! AND ALL of your friends!! You are blessed with some of the most wonderful and caring people - appreciate them!!
Love,
Mommy
thank you, mommy, i will. please continue to read and comment, i love that we can share our lives this way. yeah, nick is awesome!!! and aaron is the best boyfriend i've ever had! and you're the best mommy. i am blessed.
ReplyDeletethank you, baby, I love you.
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